Dependent

This is a poem I have been working on for the past 2 weeks it's not finished yet but I would appreciate the feedback

Dependent

Cradled in warmth

Smothered with love

Cared for every second

Not knowing who I am

What are my thoughts

Which are there’s

What are my ethics

What do I believe

Do I dare stray

Do I have a choice

Every choice already made

To seperate

To be my own being

How do I do anything

Without their guidance

I am inexperienced

I need to know

I cannot stay a infant

I must grow

I must learn

To walk to eat

To then cook

To take care of myself

So when I leave

I am strong

Not weak

To be man

To do my own thing

To go my own path

Not to swayed

Left or right

For I am not a child

At least not anymore

I make my own decisions

To be or not to be

That's my choice

No one else’s