Thursday, November 15, 2018

New Sudden Fiction “In reference to your recent communications”


This story indroduces it’s main idea in the first paragraph, it’s a letter to you ex-boyfriend. Through out this letter I was shocked and couldn’t help but laugh. She is informing her ex about her feelings regarding his way of braking up with her and his outside influences. The one part that I enjoyed is went she told him she was faking it during intercourse. Im sure after he reads this letter it would further cement his decision on not wanting to be with her. At times I feel like she really did love him but wrote this letter out of anger, it makes me wonder why is she even trying so hard to be with hmm I’m the first place. She was definitely petty by freezing all of his accounts, just because he decided not to be with you  doesn’t mean you can do things but like that. Her last sentence “with love, and hope for our future” I don’t think there will be a future between these two. He probably made the best decision of his life getting away from that psycho. 

-Amanda 

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