Saturday, November 17, 2018

I ROBOT

This a poem I was working on, just wanted to get some feedback for any thoughts on how i should improve this poem. P.S font was supposed to be roboto which looks like a typewriter font.


In the dark I wait
For light to return
In my soul
Which feels empty
Nothing and none to accompany it

I am like a robot
a hard exterior
predicting for what
Feelings will bring

Observing techniques
and behavior
To input in my programming
Waiting for success
sadly only receiving errors

As If it would be easy as copying
and pasting
You can't copy art
You can't copy art
You can't copy art
You can't copy art
You can't copy art
You can't copy art

It's unique, unlike me
I was built without all
These attributes

Unable to open my file
Of creativity
Like opening a pdf
Onto Microsoft Word

It's difficult to open
When the program
Isn't compatible

Updating is futile
I am a typewriter
and you a computer

There is no improvement
In my software
No update 2.0 or 1.5

I am a robot
Seeking a heart
Some may say soul
Eagerly scanning

Increasing my parameters
Day by day
Nothing yet found

Nothing will be found
Hopeless
For my life is not a movie
There will be no happy endings

I am just a robot
With a hard exterior
No HTML or Javascript
To make me compatible
To you nor will I ever

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