before after the train response

I found this story very weird in the way it has no real transition to the main character and the two guys in the story Jeremy and Paul. Its weird because it's like one of them doesn't exist just from the way the way its written. I not sure if its because the main character is with both men at the same time or just to many back and forth conversations in which I get lost. Its interesting way of presenting a story just hard to understand.