The power of she
By: Avery Lemonnier
She who gives life
Life flows from her
Her world turns upside
Upside down she turns it right
Right is she, wrong is he
He takes the power she gets it back
Backs turned against her she walk on and says bye
Bye to the pain and hello to life
Life comes in many forms
Forms many different being, different principals
Principals are hard to come by morals are rare
Rare is she…
I like the clarity of this piece because it is something we all can relate to. I think it reflects on women in our society, who are independent and strong enough to walk away from the misery that they are living in, to something much greater. The first two lines, also drew my attention more and from that I know this piece would be powerful.
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It feels like you're summoning your personal power and I'm delighted to witness it. Plus I relate to it! Great work so far!
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I like the words chosen in the poem in that they compliment each other and create nice rhythm
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