Thursday, September 13, 2018


                                                                The power of she

                                                           By: Avery Lemonnier

 

 

She who gives life

Life flows from her

Her world turns upside

Upside down she turns it right

Right is she, wrong is he

He takes the power she gets it back

Backs turned against her she walk on and says bye

Bye to the pain and hello to life

Life comes in many forms

Forms many different being, different principals

Principals are hard to come by morals are rare

Rare is she…  

3 comments:

  1. I like the clarity of this piece because it is something we all can relate to. I think it reflects on women in our society, who are independent and strong enough to walk away from the misery that they are living in, to something much greater. The first two lines, also drew my attention more and from that I know this piece would be powerful.

    Thank you for sharing.

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  2. It feels like you're summoning your personal power and I'm delighted to witness it. Plus I relate to it! Great work so far!

    S.

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  3. I like the words chosen in the poem in that they compliment each other and create nice rhythm

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